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:iconmixedmania:
Very nicely done. :D Good job with the repetition and geometry, and the framing as well.

One thing I might suggest: If that round thing near the center of the photo is movable, I would have moved it if I could. It's a bit distracting, in my opinion.

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I used to be so big and strong,
I used to know my right from wrong,
I used to never be afraid.
I used to be somebody.
Nine Inch Nails
:iconvolcomchick:
thanks for the suggestion :)

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:iconrefusedpunker:
I disagree with moving the round thing, it breaks up the repetition and gives something to draw your eye to on the way up the picture.

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I'll fight 'til from my bones, my flesh be hacked
:iconrefusedpunker:
Like i said keep the round thing it breaks up the repetition and gives something to look at when your eyes are getting drawn from the bottom left to the top right. it's like a rest stop on a long drive.

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I'll fight 'til from my bones, my flesh be hacked
:iconvillanelle:
This is just stunning, particularly the composition. Well done :clap:
:iconvolcomchick:
thanks :D

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:iconvolcomchick:
hehehe yeah i'm not sure if i should have kept it or not tho

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:iconmixedmania:
That is a good point... but for me the repetition is really the key to the photo, so breaking it up would be kind of bad; the perspective is enough to direct the eye's attention.

But like I said, it's a preference thing. I'm a pretty big fan of minimal styles, so fewer distractions = good. :)

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I used to be so big and strong,
I used to know my right from wrong,
I used to never be afraid.
I used to be somebody.
Nine Inch Nails
:iconrefusedpunker:
Fair enough then, I'm pretty much the opposite of minimalist my eyes enjoy making shapes and playing with pics to create a world that only I know.... I start thinking about how the little round thing got there and why it was there.

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I'll fight 'til from my bones, my flesh be hacked

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